04:05 Garven: Send to me and I'll give it a quick look
04:06 Dark Fang: http://puu.sh/2iMr9
04:08 Garven: 00:24:725 (1) - Not really a fan of the new combo spam
04:09 Dark Fang: i think that need for change to slider
04:09 Garven: 00:34:475 (2) - The flow here kind of dies when you use that repeat
04:09 Garven: It might flow better if you added a circle at 00:34:775 - instead
04:09 Garven: More to the left
04:11 Garven: 00:49:325 (1,2) - If you could get these so the circle part doesn't overlap with the slider track, it would look a lot cleaner
04:11 Garven: 00:49:325 (1,2) - If you could get these so the circle part doesn't overlap with the slider track, it would look a lot cleaner
04:12 Garven: http://puu.sh/2iMCa Or something similar
04:12 Garven: 00:56:225 (5,1) - This reads like it's a 1/4, not a 1/2
04:16 Garven: 01:31:850 (6) - ?
04:17 Garven: 01:32:450 (9) - I understand why this one is there, but it doesn't feel like a part in the music where you really need to follow the 1/4
04:17 Garven: 01:32:450 (9) - I understand why this one is there, but it doesn't feel like a part in the music where you really need to follow the 1/4
04:17 Garven: It's too laid back at this point.
04:17 Garven: You're building tension.  You don't want to release it before the finale, ya know?
04:18 Garven: 01:34:775 (7) - Although if you really want to follow through with this one, if you did some undermapping to emphasize the drums, it would work really well
04:18 Garven: 01:34:775 (7) - Although if you really want to follow through with this one, if you did some undermapping to emphasize the drums, it would work really well
04:18 Garven: 01:34:175 (5) - So here, just do three this on the red ticks with the drums
04:18 Garven: boom boom boom  http://puu.sh/2iMPH
04:18 Garven: I think it would fit pretty well and give the player something different to play for a moment
04:19 Dark Fang: i think so too ''
04:19 Garven: 01:38:525 (1,2) - Why didn't you follow the patterns from before at 01:37:325 (1,2,1,2) - ?
04:20 Garven: 01:58:175 (6,8) - Really didn't like this overlap
04:20 Garven: The flow is kind of weird too, going back to the 8
04:21 Garven: 02:10:325 (1,2) - There was one of these earlier in the kiai, but I forgot to mention it
04:21 Garven: but I really really dislike rhythms like this when they aren't emphasizing a strong rhythmic change in the song
04:22 Garven: It gets me off rhythm because the slider ends a little sooner/later than I think and I get off for the next note
04:22 Garven: Since they aren't following anything, you can't anticipate them.  You just have to memorize it, and that's not really good towards readability.
04:22 Garven: Since they aren't following anything, you can't anticipate them.  You just have to memorize it, and that's not really good towards readability.
04:24 Garven: 02:33:575 (1) - Lone slider combo :P
04:26 Garven: 03:16:325 (2) - This rhythm doesn't really fit anything.  :/
04:26 Garven: Also the sliders feel super-fast for that section considering you do slow downs elsewhere in the map
04:27 Garven: 03:36:125 (1,2,1,2,3) - This kind of comes out of nowhere.  Your mapping is quite smooth and everything is out in the open with very little overlap, then suddenly it's overlap hell with these notes.  Also the spacing from the last 2 -> 3 is really off after all those jumps.  Should put it lower.
04:27 Garven: 03:36:125 (1,2,1,2,3) - This kind of comes out of nowhere.  Your mapping is quite smooth and everything is out in the open with very little overlap, then suddenly it's overlap hell with these notes.  Also the spacing from the last 2 -> 3 is really off after all those jumps.  Should put it lower.
04:27 Garven: 03:36:125 (1,2,1,2,3) - This kind of comes out of nowhere.  Your mapping is quite smooth and everything is out in the open with very little overlap, then suddenly it's overlap hell with these notes.  Also the spacing from the last 2 -> 3 is really off after all those jumps.  Should put it lower.
04:28 Garven: 03:37:925 (3) - Another bad rhythm on a slider
04:28 Garven: 03:37:025 (1,1) - You can't have two sliders that look the same but have different speeds without a tick visible.
04:29 Garven: But yeah, there are short combos all over, and those bad 1/4 extended sliders in all the kiai sections as well, in case you're taking care of those.
04:29 Garven: But yeah, there are short combos all over, and those bad 1/4 extended sliders in all the kiai sections as well, in case you're taking care of those.
04:29 Garven: Overall a fun map though
04:30 Dark Fang: my map is trouble maker lol...
04:31 Garven: Nah, it's not that bad
04:31 Garven: Just a few suggestions from me
04:32 Dark Fang: but as far as I know you're suggestions are good things
04:32 Garven: The only thing that you -have- to change are the sliders at the end
04:32 Garven: The rest is just what I think willmake the map better and more true to the song
04:33 Garven: Anyway, I have to go.  Feel free to post my log if you want.  I'm too lazy :D