MoT's for BL 04


Dialogue: 0,0:02:55.83,0:02:58.89,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,15,,Just use that puffy chick's spatial-magic.
	-I don't think you need a hyphen here, maybe when people start using hyphens for black magic and white magic.

Dialogue: 0,0:03:05.24,0:03:06.96,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,when {\i1}I'm{\i0} the one who ran away from home?
	-Make the spacing better after italics.

Dialogue: 0,0:03:14.48,0:03:18.68,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,But now, you're just gonna give up 'n run just 'cause your older brother's involved?
	-Kill the comma for the flow.


~07:04 
	-Missing TS.


Dialogue: 0,0:07:43.63,0:07:45.45,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,Actually, I {\i1}was{\i0} suspicious...
	-Make spacing better after italics.


Dialogue: 0,0:07:49.59,0:07:52.00,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,And now I'm sure of it.
Dialogue: 0,0:07:52.69,0:07:55.12,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,You were hiding something, after all.
	-"But now" for the first line.
	-No comma for the second line.


~08:07 
	-Missing TS.


~08:13
	-MC says "Huh?" So maybe add it to the script?


Dialogue: 0,0:08:30.62,0:08:34.04,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,Your magic. It's flow is unnatural.
	-No apostrophe for "It's".


Dialogue: 0,0:08:34.48,0:08:38.04,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,It was lke something leaking out of a crack in a sealed chest.
	-lke->like
	-Line break after "leaking".


Dialogue: 0,0:09:43.58,0:09:45.16,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,Uh...yeah?
	-Add a space.


Dialogue: 0,0:09:58.15,0:10:03.06,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,His study of magic was only a pretense for his obsession to kill me.
	-Line break after "pretense".


Dialogue: 0,0:10:03.06,0:10:06.34,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,He'd come up with every strange potion or dangerous experiment he could think of,
	-No comma.


Dialogue: 0,0:11:04.49,0:11:08.98,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,So why did your brother go through so much trouble to seal your magic, anyway?
	-Line break after "so".


Dialogue: 0,0:11:17.10,0:11:18.99,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,Okay, all set!
	-TS after this: Missing "Boss".


Dialogue: 0,0:11:34.01,0:11:36.03,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,It has a touch-screen.
	-I prefer "touchscreen" over the hyphenated version.


Dialogue: 0,0:12:24.54,0:12:26.35,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,Y-Yes, I will.
	-This isn't a stutter. It's more of a "Uh, yes" type of thing.


Dialogue: 0,0:12:39.81,0:12:41.05,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,Wh-Where?
	-I prefer "W" only unless the "h" is pronounced too, like "who".


Dialogue: 0,0:13:36.22,0:13:37.76,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,I {\i1}do{\i0} think you suck.
	-Make spacing better after italics.


Dialogue: 0,0:14:23.44,0:14:26.47,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,I could be as stubborn as I want, but it won't get me out of here, right?
	-Line break before "but".


Dialogue: 0,0:14:32.23,0:14:37.74,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,You think that once my powers are fully unleashed, I can steal your magic as well.
	-Can something be done about this? This two-liner is hella ugly. Line break is even uglier. Maybe split into two lines. Or just leave it.


Dialogue: 0,0:14:44.33,0:14:48.30,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,And then, I'll take your magic and hunt you down wherever you go.
	-No comma.


Dialogue: 0,0:15:07.20,0:15:08.89,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,Your {\i1}chutoro{\i0}. (Medium fatty tuna)
	-Can we do something about this?
		<Neibs> you could just say tuna
		<Neibs> ootoro = tasty tuna
		<Neibs> chuutoro = tuna
		<Neibs> uhhhh
		<Neibs> i forgot what the other one was
	-So make it two u's.

Dialogue: 0,0:16:36.83,0:16:38.67,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,Sure, if he seems in a good mood.
	-seems to be?


Dialogue: 0,0:17:08.90,0:17:11.00,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,I better sneak in unnoticed.
	-"I'd better", not "I better".
		http://english.stackexchange.com/questions/10358/why-is-it-i-better-not-verb-instead-of-i-better-dont-verb


Dialogue: 0,0:18:38.67,0:18:39.77,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,What was that?!
	-Retime and add stutter.


~19:47
	-Missing TS.


Dialogue: 0,0:19:54.35,0:19:58.03,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,{\i1}She serves a duty and privilege{\i0} {\i1}appropriate for a noble demon...{\i0}
	-Line break after "privilege".


Dialogue: 0,0:20:12.70,0:20:16.11,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,{\i1}The place people call{\i0} {\i1}"Liz's Toy Box"...{\i0}
	-American quotation puts "..." inside.


~20:45
	-If you want to add that "Huh?" or w/e.


Dialogue: 0,0:21:25.78,0:21:31.72,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Prisoner number 1097639 has pushed the "challenge" button.{\i0}
	-Line break after "has".


Dialogue: 0,0:24:08.98,0:24:10.02,Blood Lad - Main,,0,0,0,,But no one ever can.
	-Mistimed.


Dialogue: 0,0:24:25.86,0:24:27.78,Blood Lad - Main,,35,0,0,,{\an1}Care to try some \Npetit-surgery, young lady?
	-No hyphen.


Dialogue: 0,0:24:29.03,0:24:32.12,Blood Lad - Main,,35,0,0,,{\an1}N-Next time on Blood Lad, \N"Unidentified Demon Object."
	-Colon.