Chapter 1

cp01_02500

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 Not even my childhood friend today.;
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it.I won't press the subject.;

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>"From the looks of it, you don't now either, huh?";

//now -> know

cp01_03000

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 You go on ahead.;

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cp01_04800

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dream. 
They weren't.;

//The line break here seems awkward, may be better if they were on the same line?

cp01_07300

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 I chose.
 This is what I had to choose.";

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