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[*]00:01:778 - You should add a note here, there's clearly a sound in the music here that needs to be mapped, specially since this is an extra diff
[*]00:03:803 (1,5,6) - You should prevent sliders from starting on the red tick unless they really fit in the music, they don't fit in this case as the strong beat is on the end of the slider right now
[*]00:06:203 (5,6) - ^
[*]00:21:353 (8,1) - For the same reason, slider (1) should start 1/2 earlier, + it usually doesn't work to end a slider on the start of a new measure (the big white tick)
^For this I suggest you put a circle where 00:21:353 (8) - is now, start 00:21:803 (1) - at 00:21:653 - and add a note at 00:21:953 -
[*]00:24:503 (4,5) - Like mentioned before, these red tick sliders don't fit
[*]00:38:753 (8,9) - The spacing here should be bigger
[*]00:42:203 (3,4,5) - Same thing with the red tick sliders, they don't fit
[*]00:44:753 (2,3,4,5) - This is basically a stream of 4 notes, which doesn't fit unless the music allows you do, either remove (3) or extend this stream by 1 note
[*]00:45:353 (6,1,2) - This spacing should be even
[*]00:49:028 (2,3,4,5) - I really dislike the angle you have to make here, I suggest you make something that flows better
[*]01:40:853 (1,2) - I don't see a reason for this overlap, it doesn't really look that good either
[*]01:44:153 (5,6,7,8) - Same here, would be nice if you could prevent this
[*]01:45:653 (1,2,3,4) - ^
[*]01:49:553 (4) - This slider should be 1/2, not 1/3. End it on 01:49:703 -
[*]01:50:453 (1,2,3,4) - This flows really bad, try making the angles less extreme here. And on top of that, These sliders: 01:50:903 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - all start on red ticks which don't fit, start them 1/2 earlier or later
[*]01:53:603 (2,3,4,5) - Same about the red ticks
[*]01:58:853 (17,1,2) - This spacing is really bad due to the fact its 1/2 and 1/1 here, I suggest putting 01:59:003 (1) -  at x:60 y:328 to make the spacing even and not confusing to play
[*]01:59:453 (3) - ^ move to x:164 y:48
[*]02:33:803 (1,2,3) - Same thing about red tick sliders again
[*]02:48:503 (6) - ^
[*]03:09:053 (4) - I'd prefer to have an NC here to indicate the SV change
[*]03:26:003 (3) - Red tick slider again
[*]03:44:453 - I think it'd be fun to have a note here and starting the spinner 1/4 later (also decrease it's length by 1/4)
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